Fangala the Flying Feline

*blinks* Did I miss something? This is way short, but I totally understand the beauty of a short poem. Very powerful statement, but I think it's more like a quote ...

Hey, nice job. I must admit, when I first saw this, I was like, "Oh Lord, every line starts with 'forgive me'. But I was hooked as soon as I ...

Thanks for the reviews, everybody! Anyway, here the story starts. Enjoy! Chapter One: The Maid and Me The first time I saw the Skeletal Hand was when I was in ...

Yah, this is my novella. I posted the intro to this, and I highly recommend reading that first. The prologue is a flashback to the night the Skeletal Hand killed ...

This is the introduction to Faith, a novella I wrote in sixth grade. It was edited last year. Anyway, I'm posting it to see if anyone's interested in reading more. ...

I agree with everybody--this is very cute. Especially the last line. Love how you put it in bold. There's just one thing you might consider changing, and that's the rhyme ...

First off, I think you should break this into verses. Just makes it easier to read, you know? Imagery would make this stronger. Why is this life so bleak? How ...

Oh. My. God. Sheer genius!

The chorus is beautiful, but the rest needs a little work. Don't get me wrong--I love this! But I think you should either correct the capitalization or put the whole ...

Very nice. It totally painted a picture in my head, and the short, bouncy rhythm compliments the theme. Bravo...I love your poems!

Your first paragraph is very intriguing, but you do need to break up the rest of it. Also, putting actual numbers in your writing makes it seem like a math ...

Aw, thanks, Muffin! I was beginning to think this poem was invisible! *purrs*

Haha, I can relate to this. I agree that you could use some imagery, but don't go overboard. Just give more concrete examples of how evil the distributive property is; ...

Mupert?!!? Good god, I love that name. Look, I can tell by your writing that you're a very good writer. What's more, you constructed a remarklably-random story with plot AND ...

"Wanna see something cool?" Roscoe asked. "Define 'cool'," Llewelyn said. Suddenly, Roscoe was gone, replaced by a jet-black horse with rippling wings. "Holy cow!" Llewelyn shrieked, jumping back. "Ho